My Passion Project - A nod to Redwall and my Furballs

 An Ode to my Childhood

I grew up always reading.  The Redwall series by Brian Jacques was inspirational in my creative muscle growth, as well as the Chronicles of Narnia among many others.  With three cats currently letting me live with them, I thought it prudent during COVID to start a novel based on them, including each of their personalities in various ways.  This is the prologue for that story, at present still a work in progress but complete to the end of Book 1.  It is an epic tale like many a Redwall adventure, or a wheel of time story, or Lord of the Rings, where I will continue to work in crafting a larger world through the adventures of Yuki and Haru my first two furballs, while including of course the Prince of the North himself, Beerus.

So here I give you all the beginning of my passion project:

The Adventures of Haru and Yuki: A Journey North

Prologue

The sun peaked through wispy winter clouds as a light snowfall coated the stark and frozen farmland with a glistening sheen.  A snaking river wound its way through the frosty landscape, broken only by a few sparse forests of fur, oak, and maple.  To the West a large forest rose along the banks as the river continued its trek toward the far-off ocean.  Mountains stood impassable to the far Northeast beyond a sprawling arctic forest. 

The peaceful silence was broken by the crunch of a paw on the snow.  At the edge of the Great Northern Forest, a regal black and white cat appeared through the dark tree line. Puffs of warm breath emanated from his black nose, rising on the chilled air.  A wolf-fur draped his torso, guarding against the chilling wind. His yellow eyes gleamed like diamonds in the weak sunlight and only his pointed ears protruded above a crown made of wolf fangs.

After a few more lithe paces out of the shelter of the trees, he stopped at the top of a slope which ran down from the forest towards the farms and river below.  He narrowed his eyes and gazed out across the land toward the village directly South, nestled along the river. Smoke rose from the chimneys of homes, the blacksmith shop, and the bakery.  This was a place of peace and prosperity, of fishing and trading.  All manner of Squirrel, Fox, Rabbits, Mice, Otters, and Cats called this place home.  The large fire from the blacksmith was a bright beacon on the frigid winter palate, broken only by the grays and browns of wood and stone.  Bridges crossed the river in the center, East, and West ends of the Village.  The central bridge was a large stone structure that connected the main road through the heart of town, wide enough for a cart to traverse with thick wooden planks.  A small bell tower sat atop the largest building, the Council Chamber, on the Northern side.  Fish nets were strewn up at various points and markets along the waterfront, waiting for spring to return.  The wheel at the mill seemed almost frozen in place by the ice along the rivers edges where the current was slow.  The falling snow was packing in on the rooftops and coating the town with a fresh layer of white.

A slow, conniving sneer stretched across the cat’s black and white visage; his pink lower lip, with its white chin fur, in stark contrast to the black upper lip and nose.  A fang stuck out over his lip on the left side of his face mischievously.  A stiff gust of wind ruffled his whiskers and pulled the sneer off his face.   He tugged the fur coat tighter around him.

This moment was ten years in the making.  Ten years of training, waiting, and planning.  Back then he was a young adolescent kitten, carefree and happy.  This village was the start of he and his father’s revenge.  The beginning of his new life. 

He was Beerus, Crown Prince of Norvalir and he had come to this Kingdom to pass judgement on those who had wronged him, had stolen from him, and had shunned his homeland.  He would punish those who had punished him when they killed his mother.

He turned, swirling his fir around him, and stalked back toward the trees where his army waited.  A golden bell at his neck jingled lightly on a red string, a gift from his mother, the symbol of his strength, and a warning to his enemies. 

***

High overhead a large red-tailed hawk cruised on the breeze towards the same snowy little village.  As he floated over the forest and headed South, he spotted a cat disappearing into the trees.  Was that a Crown on its head?  A soft sound like a jingle bell rose to him through the air.

Without a moment’s hesitation he tucked his wings and dove, gaining speed.  Haste was of the essence.  This incursion needed to be reported as fast he could fly.  The Prince of Norvalir had come to Eleria.  He had to warn the King!

***

The King of Eleria, Ferrin the IV, dispatched his two most trust-worthy commanders to defend Yukimura Village.  They arrived as quickly as they could, but the battle had already begun.  The story of our protagonists began that fateful night.  Heroes would be made, and villains would be vilified.

***

Yukimura Village was a quiet, peaceful fishing village on the Salmon River in the Northwest Corner of Eleria.  Surrounded by the forests to the West and South, and with farms to the North abutting the Great Forests; it was an essential trading post and resting point from the Coast to Eleria’s Capital.  Lumber, fish, and grain were exported to neighboring villages and towns far and wide.  For the last century it had been a thriving community.

This night it was on fire.

Having marched tirelessly from the Southeast, Gilgamesh the red fox and Valentin the artic fox could see the smoke billowing on the horizon as Talon the red-tailed hawk scout reported in. 

“Sirs, the Village is under attack already! Crown Prince Beerus is leading an army of about 100.  The people are fleeing but were caught unawares. We must hurry, Sir!” Talon squawked out the last sentence, out of breath, and knelt over with his wings on his knees.

Gilgamesh grabbed him by the shoulder, “Right!  I need you back in the air Talon, be wary of archers and crows.  Norvalir may still have an alliance with the Raven Clan.  Report any new developments as quickly as you can”.  He squeezed his shoulder hard and stared in Talon’s telescopic eyes, “Help direct any civilians you can to escape to this side of the river. And please be careful my feathered friend, I won’t lose you today”. 

“Yes Sir!” Talon stood tall, cocked his knees, and with a strong flap of his wings thrusts himself back into the night sky.  Gilgamesh watched him soar toward Yukimura and disappear into the smoky haze.  He turned back to his best friend Valentin with a determined look on his face, ears bristling in anticipation, “Valentin, take Chief and half our men to secure the bridges on the West and East side of the village.  If they have yet to be crossed or taken, hold them until Talon can give us an all clear for evacuation of the people on the North side of the town.   After that, destroy the bridges and hit any boats with fire arrows.  We will funnel the enemy to the central bridge in town.  I will take the rest of us and hold there while evacuating this side of the river.  Once we have destroyed the bridges, guard the villagers back to camp.  I’ll meet up with you as soon as I can”. 

“Will do Sir!  And Sir...?” Valentin asked hesitantly with a worried expression on his face, whiskers twitching nervously.  His white fox fur always glistened pristinely.

Gilgamesh grabbed his friend… nay, his brother by the forearm in a salute.  They may never be blood, but they would always be brothers. 

“Good luck and Godspeed brother.  This is our town, our home, we will protect the people at all costs”.  Valentin stood up straight, clutched his forearm tight and nodded.  His fur rippled in pride.  Gilgamesh could still see the hints of fear in his amber eyes.  Only 18 of them versus 100 Norvalir soldiers.  Worse yet, only 8 of his men had ever seen any combat action against bandits in the East.  He had Chief and Valentin to lead them and had to keep faith in their experience.  They would have to make do.  They were the best in Eleria and would protect their hometown to the last man if they must.  This was close to home for Chief too.  They all spent a lot of time here as children.

He turned to his men; two freshly trained twin squirrel archers Fig and Olive, a veteran spear-wielding river-otter Ziggy, and his best swordsmen, a Rabbit named Keize.  He had to cast worry aside for Fig and Olive, he had trained them himself, they would know what to do when the time came.  Keize and Ziggy were a great team and had been with him for years. 

Gilgamesh flicked his tail back and forth quickly, plucked his longsword from its sheath and turned toward the village.  He steeled his voice and sneered his snout, “Let’s go save these people and show that mangey Prince what-for.  You attack our home, and you deal with the Elerian Rangers.” 

With that he stuck his sword in his mouth, dropped to all fours, and sprinted off toward the Village at full speed.  His four men in tow, bells jingling with every stride.  The cold winter wind whipped at his thick red fur even as the heat from the fire reached them.  It spurred him on even faster. He would save these people.

***

As they approached, he flashed past all manner of Loggers, Bakers, and Townspeople running down the road Southeast out of the Village.  There was no time to waste, there had to still be plenty of folks still in town.  The village housed hundreds of squirrels, rabbits, otters, cats, and more.  He saw faces that he recognized but did not dare slow down.  Getting to the bridge first was everything. 

They sprinted up the road towards the Town Hall with its cedar roof taller than the other buildings was easy to make out on this side of the river.  The steeple on top of it ringed in an orange glow as the buildings on the North side burned.  It looks like they might make it to the bridge in time. 

They plunged through the slightly damp and snowy streets, paws thumping hard into the frosty ground.  Gilgamesh cut right past the Metalworks shop and hit the main thoroughfare towards the stone bridge.  Yukimura had some stone buildings but few, the mill, the blacksmith, Council Chamber to the North side, and this bridge were the main stone structures.  Though the bridge was stone, the slats that ran across were still wood.  The bridges on the East and West were just wood and could be cut down. That was why he sent Valentin and Chief to those two.  He had the harder task; the wood was wet and would not burn easily.  He also could not hack the supports and collapse it. He ducked behind the wall on this side of the river and turned back toward his four soldiers as they ran up behind him. 

“Fig, Olive, you two take stations behind cover and watch the other side of the river.  If you see a ferret, weasel, or rat shoot it. Zig, I need you to go get some oil from the blacksmith shop, we need to get this bridge burning once we know everyone is across.  Keize, you’re with me, we’re going to take a trip across the bridge and see how far they’ve come into town and make sure everyone is across.”

They set to their tasks, Fig ducked behind a large lantern post to the East of the bridge, and his sister Olive did the same to the West.  They looked scared, their tawny tails stiff and quivering.  He could not worry about them, he had to get across and trust their skill.  Ziggy bounded off to the East toward the stone smokestack that marked the blacksmith shop.  Gilgamesh would not be surprised it the old badger blacksmith was out defending the town with his hammer. 

With a quick nod to Keize, they ducked down and scuttled across the bridge, as low to the ground as they could go.  As they came across the small rise in the middle their vision cleared to the North side of the village. 

The Fish Market to the East was still intact, the nets and fishing equipment still blowing in the wind as fiery ash from the Northwest fell.  Farther down to the West they could barely make out the Western bridge and the Mill looked to be on fire, though the Stone was seemingly backlit by the flames as it still stood.  They could make out at least one boat on fire floating down the river towards them.  Valentin was doing his job. 

Keize whispered in his ear, “It looks like ther East Bridge is down already, and I can’t seer any boats in thater direction”.  As he finished his sentence, Talon whooshed by overhead ducking an Arrow from the North as he headed West toward Valentin’s position. 

Another arrow smacked into the wet wood three feet in front of Keize. The shooter was a Rat wearing the black and gold colors of Norvalir.  Keize plucked his hoplon off his back, stood up and sprinted off ahead sliding his sword out from behind his shield as he ran behind it.  Gilgamesh snarled and sprang up running directly behind Keize to utilize his shield.  As he pounded down the North slope of the bridge, a second Norvalir solider, a black and white ferret, appeared from a side street next to the rat.  Gilgamesh tucked behind Keize, tightened up his back-leg muscles and using his rabbit friend for cover, leapt over him and angled down hard toward the rat. 

They were too fast for the rat to re-knock his bow.  Gilgamesh planted his front paws into the Rat’s eyes and drove his head into the ground, knocking him out.  At the same moment he leapt over Keize, the agile rabbit cut left and slashed toward the newly arrived Ferret.  His eyes opened wide in shock and his mouth opened to shout just as Keize’s sword cut a swath across the Ferret’s chest, leaving him in a heap on the street next to the unconscious Rat.

They regained their bearings, battle focus in full force, heart thumping and checked around them.  While the fires raged, it was hard to hear anything so he doubted anyone would have noticed their skirmish.  There were not any other enemies in their immediate viscinity.  Gilgamesh stood up from his crouch and tucked behind the fish market building to stare down a side-street while Keize took up position on the opposite side of the street.  No enemies appeared in either of their side-streets.  The city was lit like daylight.  It would be hard to hide and sneak up on anyone without diving into smoke filled areas and not being able to breathe.  He flicked a finger forward with a sweeping arm motion, signaling to Keize he was going to sneak up to the next building.  It was be the Pelican’s Bowl restaurant. 

As he crouched down and snuck forward, tail down, ears up, he listened for any noise above the roaring thrum of the fire.  Halfway across the face of the fish Market, he heard a rustle of armor ahead and a pair of weasels trotted down the street toward the rat and ferret. 

“Oy Jabbey!  Look!  Someone attacked Snags and Buggers!” one of them shouted to their comrade.

Gilgamesh hit the ground and froze, hoping they wouldn’t see him.  Too late.  As he hit the ground, one of the Weasels raised a paw to point in his direction. 

“A fox! I sees a fox by the market mate!” he exclaimed. They drew their short-swords and charged at him. 

Gilgamesh jumped up and crossed his arms to his forearm sheaths to grab and throw two knives.  As his fingers closed on the hilts of the throwing knives, he heard a whistle come from his left and the two Weasels dropped to the ground.  Arrows protruded from their chest right in the middle of the Norvalir crest on their tabards. 

He whistled quietly in admiration. Olive and Fig were definitely going to be good to have on his team.  He turned back to Keize who shrugged and snuck forward on his side of the street.  As they approached a small bend in the street ahead where the weasels had come from the buildings were now raging with fire.  The enemy soldiers had set the trade depot on fire and it was blowing over to the houses nearby and on neighboring streets.  Keize had grown up in this part of town.  Gilgamesh took a glance over to his comrade who looked visibly shaken; a tear forming in the corner of his eye.  Keize’s long ears had drooped to the side of his head. 

Gilgamesh may have grown up here, but his family had lived in the woods to the Southwest.  The foxes were not city folk, they preferred their space.  Though his Father had been a council member of the town at times, they managed their small household and helped represent other families outside of village limits.  Valentin’s family was also from that area upstream. 

He turned back up the road and saw a family of mice run quickly from a side alley down the main street toward the bridge behind them.  He knew that family, it was Bakery shop owner Adalbert with his wife and children.  His oldest daughter carried their grandchild in a basket.  As they approached Keizer’s position, he motioned for them to duck into the alleyway he guarded.  A spear thrown from up ahead landed on the ground near the mice and caused one of them to stumble and trip.  Keize sprung up and planted his shield into the ground in front of the mouse which blocked the next spear that rattled off it.  Gilgamesh looked back North and spotted a black and white Cat flanked by two Lynx, their white fur spotted with black, tainted orange by the flames of the Trade Depot behind them.

“Beerus”, Gilgamesh snarled to himself.  He never did like that conniving, arrogant little brat.  With a flick of his wrist Beerus ordered the two Lynx forward.  They wore black breastplates bearing the crest of Norvalir, a gold clawed-paw with a three-pronged crown.  Gilgamesh sprang out into the street and skidded on some melted ice next to Keize.  The mouse had risen and ducked around the building to hide with his family.  The fires up ahead were a building away now on both sides of the street.  The lynx were menacing hulking shadows wreathed in flame as they approached.  They pulled long hooked pikes off their back as they strode forward. 

Gilgamesh took a quick glance behind him, but they were too far around the corner for Fig and Olive to be any support.  Behind the Lynx, Beerus watched, ears forward, head tilted down, a satisfied smirk on his face.  They had met many times during training and trade meetings, before Norvalir and Eleria had ceased their alliance.   He had always thought of Beerus as spoiled and unfit to lead, but this looked like a different cat altogether.  He seemed determined, calm, and evil.  Tragic events had caused a great rift between the nations and driven his Beerus’ Father to isolation and madness.  Now his son seemed to be turning to evil deeds to make a name for himself. 

The Lynx were almost upon them.  They leaned forward into a run with pikes outstretched and closed the gap to Keize and Gilgamesh quickly.  Gilgamesh ducked right as the larger Lynx thrust at him, grazing his tunic, and clipping the light chainmail underneath.  To his left Keize had parried the thrust of his opponent with his shield but left himself open to the butt of the pike.  The Lynx brought the pole up and around and smacked him on the left shoulder.  Keize yelped but rolled with the blow and somersaulted over his shield.  He flipped the shield back up just in time to counter a overhead blow as the Lynx swung the pike straight down toward his head.

Gilgamesh parried another thrust with his sword.  He back-pedaled a step to give him a chance to avoid the same attack that staggered Keize. 

An ear-piercing shriek hit his ears and a flurry of feathers eclipsed his view as Talon dove from the sky claws first. He smacked into Lynx, who was sent tumbling across the street.  The Lynx smacked into the side of the bakery and collapsed into a heap against the wall. 

Behind him the other Lynx hammered quick hard blows on Keize’s shield.  His left arm still held his sword but was still too weak from the first blow to strike back.  Gilgamesh sprung left and swept his leg around to take out the Lynx’s legs.  The Lynx barely even flinched when his leg connected.  He did, however, turn back towards Gilgamesh.  Keize planted his shield into the ground, threw his body into a hundred-eighty-degree turn, and thrust his powerful rabbit legs into the chest plate of the Lynx.  The big muscular cat stumbled back down the street a good ten feet before he tripped on his pike haft and hit his face hard on the ground. 

Up ahead Beerus knocked an arrow to his bow and had aimed it at Talon, who had just gotten up from his tumble with Gilgamesh’s opponent.  The burly Lynx still leaned against the Bakery was trying to pull himself up.  Blood streaked his nose and cheek where Talon’s claws had gouged him deep.  Talon turned toward Gilgamesh and Beerus loosed his arrow. 

“Talon!” Gilgamesh yelled too late.  Talon took the arrow on his left wing.  The tip sank into his feathered skin.  Talon squawked in pain and dropped to the ground clutching his wing. 

He had to get Talon out of here.  Gilgamesh ran toward Talon, grabbed his right wing, and looped it over his shoulders. He helped him to his feet, and they headed back down the street. The mouse family was headed for the bridge ahead.  Keize hopped backwards down the street behind them, shield up.  As they approached the bridge Ziggy came ran across and grabbed Talon from Gilgamesh.

“Sir, the bridge is coated in oil on the South Side, it’s ready to ignite once we’re across”

“Great work Zig, help Talon and get him to safety.  Keize and I will hold the rear”.  Gilgamesh turned back around to gain his bearings on Beerus and the two Lynx.  They hadn’t come around the corner behind them yet.  Beerus may look determined, but he was still a coward at heart.  He wouldn’t push forward without support.  The Bakery was now on fire and the fish market roof began to burn.  The whole North Side would be destroyed soon. 

His Black fox ears twitched in all directions as he listened for sounds of survivors or enemies.  He twisted to the right as he thought he heard whimpering and mewing.  The fish market storage barrels along the water caught his attention as they would be empty this time of year.  It is possible someone would try to hide in them.  He motioned to Keize to keep rear guard on Talon and Ziggy who hobbled over the bridge. 

A Brown Ferret came at them with a sword from along the riverfront.  Two arrows from across the river immediately took him down, one in the shoulder. Olive and Fig had eyes on them again.

He crouched down along the market fence and made his way toward the fish barrels.  Gilgamesh popped open the lid on the first barrel, but it was empty.  The second barrel he checked had a hole in the top but was full of half frozen fish.  Keize made a frantic gesture from the bridge for Gilgamesh to come back.  The Lynx must have come around the corner.  The mewing had stopped, Gilgamesh feared the worst when he opened the third barrel. 

Inside was a young Calico maybe 5 or 6 years old, huddled next to a gray and black striped tabby that was likely a bit younger.  They held each other tight and looked up at him with terror in their eyes and tears streamed down their faces.  They shook with fear.  He grabbed them both by the scruff and hauled them out of the barrel, tucking one of them under each arm and turned back toward Keize. 

The Rabbit had his word out and shield ready.  The Lynx were charging down the street toward his brave friend.  Ears back, tail shaking in anticipation, Gilgamesh knew Keize wouldn’t stand a chance against both of them.  Further up the street Beerus stalked slowly with arrow drawn. Two rats flanked him on either side with shields and staves. 

Gilgamesh launched himself with every ounce of strength in his legs towards the bridge, making it there a few seconds before the Lynx reached Keize.  An arrow from the South side of the bridge glanced off a rat’s shield by Beerus. He flinched reflexively, which forced him to flinch and drop his bow before he could fire.  Another arrow glanced off the breastplate of the Lynx Keize had kicked before.  The second Lynx aimed a sweeping blow under Keize’s shield to catch his legs, but Keize managed to leap up and over it.  Another arrow zoomed from the South and bounced off his opponent’s breastplate.  It staggered him enough to give them the opening they needed. 

Gilgamesh and Keize bounded across the bridge, paws and feet pounding the wood.  They slipped on the oil Ziggy had spread on the planks and slid their way down to the South side.  Olive had a burning arrow notched and ready and fired it into the middle of the bridge.  The Lynx and one of the rats approached the middle of the bridge span as it ignited like kindling, engulfing the rat, and setting one of the Lynx’s fur on fire.  They jumped back and howled in pain. 

Gilgamesh had the scared kittens under each arm, Ziggy carried the wounded Talon, and the mouse family all set off down the road out of town towards their camp.  Olive and Fig watched the rear while Keize ran point and checked side streets ahead for other villagers.

The two kittens in his arms were ashen, smelled fishy, and still had tears dripping down their cheeks.  Gilgamesh had not noticed earlier, but he knew them… and he knew their parents.

“Haru…? Yuki…?  You two can stop crying now, I’ll keep you safe. “, they looked up at him, recognition dawned on their faces, but the sad eyes didn’t abate.  Gilgamesh knew then he couldn’t save everyone and hadn’t saved everyone.  These two had lost their parents and they probably weren’t the only ones to die this night, but he would honor those losses by taking care of these two.  It was the least he could do for the town he loved that was burning behind him. 

He took one last glance over his shoulder and saw Beerus on the other side of the river, yellow eyes flickering in the light of the burning bridge.  One day he’d make that furball answer for his crimes against this place.

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